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Okay here's one of the outputs: > Before you start, make sure that your AWS credentials are correct. If they are not, S3 rejects the upload with a permission e
by handfuloflight 3mo ago
Okay here's one of the outputs:
> Before you start, make sure that your AWS credentials are correct. If they are not, S3 rejects the upload with a permission error.
Wouldn't it be better to write:
Before start, ensure AWS credentials are correct. Otherwise, S3 rejects uploads with permission error.
- stavros 3mo agoNo, how is that better?
- deleted 3mo ago[deleted]
- harshreality 3mo agoThe example is unambiguous. Your modification is ambiguous at best. <failure to ensure aws credentials are correct> != <aws credentials are incorrect>
- trhway 3mo agoWhich one would do better in a college essay? I think the original one, and it has higher word count.
- dghlsakjg 3mo agoThe actual STE standard would score horrendously in a college essay. STE encourages simplification and tons of repetition of words that is discouraged by college professors. It is designed to be clear technical writing for people with a loose grasp of English. College writing encourages complex sentence structure, varied word choice for the same concept and other things that make the writing more interesting at the expense of clarity.
- deleted 3mo ago[deleted]
- qznc 3mo agoViolates rule 4.2: Do not omit words or use contractions to shorten sentences. Keep articles, keep "that".