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Ever see something new, and just know it’s going to survive? Your site copy is great to the last drop. Great submission.
by DANmode 3mo ago
Ever see something new, and just know it’s going to survive?
Your site copy is great to the last drop.
Great submission.
- sevg 3mo ago> Your site copy is great to the last drop. It is? It’s just the usual LLM.
- DANmode 3mo agoThe design = “flavor of the week LLM”, but someone still has to proof and tweak generated copy. Someone cared about this page.
- sevg 3mo agoYeah, no. Not enough to make the page not look and sound like straight from an LLM.
- ga_to 3mo agoAlso not enough to make the text even a slight bit more readable. I have perfect eyes and am still struggling to focus on the headlines.
- orphereus 3mo agoLol
- notpushkin 3mo agoNo X. No Y. A is your B. We do G, not H. C, D, E — plus an optional F. No I, no J, no K — just an L into a W. I would say the design is the most human thing about this page. (It has its charm somehow, even if it’s obviously “flavour of the week LLM design”. Also, I don’t think an LLM would choose colours so poorly unless nudged in that direction – accidentally, I suppose.)
- DANmode 3mo agoOh no, concise sentences. Must be an inappropriate use of the robot! Kind of exhausting. If you think (or care), that the LLM wrote all of the subheaders, the category names etc, then you might be spending too much time focused on the wrong thing.
- notpushkin 3mo agoI don’t really care. I’m just... disappointed a bit? It seems like a cool project, but those “concise sentences” don’t make it easier to learn about it. no passwords. no OAuth. no accounts. your ssh key is your identity. chats, scores, and streaks are tied to your public key fingerprint. same key, same data. No accounts? How is that possible? You literally store my data! Is that not an account? And what the fuck is OAuth? (Okay, this clearly is oriented at developers, but on its own the sentence just doesn’t make sense. For me as a user, what pain is removed by not having a “Sign in with GitHub” button? Why should I care?) How about you tell me why you decided to do it that way: all your data – chats, scores, streaks – is tied to your ssh public key. no need to come up with a password or verify your email – just ssh in. It took me a couple of minutes to write this, sure, but at least it now makes sense. And it’s more concise, no? (It still sounds llm-y to me, but whatever.) Now, for bonus points, there’s two obvious questions to answer: • what do I do if I lose my SSH key? • what do I do if I use more than one device? (The obvious answers are “you can add other SSH keys in your account settings” and “you can add other SSH keys in your account settings”.) --- Okay, one more, and then I need to go grab a beer. a read-only peek at the TUI in your browser. tab around, see what's inside. no typing, no chat, no games — just a window into a shared demo session. for the real thing, `ssh late.sh`. Concise? a read-only preview of late.sh in your browser. poke around and see what's inside. `ssh late.sh` when you’re ready to chat and play.
- DANmode 3mo agoI like your last improvement, for sure. The goal of the lander is to get you to use the clubhouse. Not get you to become a contributor, or intrigued/turned away by their stack choice. PS You could also be a heathen, and use the same key across devices!
- tkel 3mo agoYou might be projecting . All the docs in the app looks like the usual wall-of-text that was autogenerated .
- tkel 3mo agoThere's maybe 100 words on the page. It would have taken someone 5 minutes to type that out. But apparently the creator didn't even care enough to do that.
- calgoo 3mo agoSee thats the difference, i don't core personally. Its a page to tell you to connect to the ssh server (or install their script). Why does it have to be a philosophical masterpiece? Its just word on a page saying click here, better looking then the majority of the SEO garbage that has plagued the internet for the last 15 year thanks to google and friends.
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