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Ask HN: Review my Startup

13 points by JanKoenig 14y ago

Hello guys. A friend and I built a small web app last week and we would love to get some feedback. Are we providing enough value for the users? Is there enough information on the homepage for people to sign up with Facebook? Here's the page, thank you for your feedback! www.doitbefore.com Regards from Germany, Jan

masnick 14y ago
Clickable: http://www.doitbefore.com http://www.doitbefore.com I don't do Facebook logins on 3rd party sites, but the landing page looks nice.
hieronymusN 14y ago
"make piece with someone"
padseeker 14y ago
"Are we providing enough value for the users?" Enough value for what?
GFischer 14y ago
First of all, congratulations for shipping, that's half the battle :) . I like the logo, background very much. Like masnick, I don't really use Facebook logins unless I absolutely must (AND it's blocked at work). I'd remove the "test test test" goal :) . Maybe you can pre-populate from the best-known bucket lists?
vacipr 14y ago
So you built an app that's only viable 17 days ?
- slajax 14y ago
  no they built a "startup" that is only viable for 17 days.
  - Goranek 14y ago
    is it really import if it's "startup" or just a website? ...
- JanKoenig 14y ago
  hey. for us it's just an experiment: are people willing to submit a single goal and show it to others? of course after 21st there are other possibilities to catch people's attention (think about New Year's resolutions).
  - vacipr 14y ago
    The problem is the world will most likely not end and you will be forced to change the approach. The other thing is discoverability If people really want something they'll do it eventually especially if they believe the world ends,with or without an app such as yours. As with all opinions mine may be biased especially since I'm not a big social networking enthusiast. I hope you guys get the best out of this experiment.
mansigandhi 14y ago
Congratulations on going live! I think maybe a short explanation on how you add value/your USP might help. There are several goal achievement related websites out there. Also, you probably want to think about how you are going to change the punch line post Dec 2012 :)
ChrisBland 14y ago
Nice looking landing page but I don't have facebook so the site is completely useless to me.
roasbeef 14y ago
Just because you created a web app, doesn't mean you have a startup.
- bbissoon 14y ago
  ... Straight mean bro.
- JanKoenig 14y ago
  hey. I just wanted to follow format conventions. "Ask HN: Review my Startup" is a thread I often see here, so I tried it out. Of course I know that a simple web app is no startup at all, that's the reason why I called it "web app" and not "startup" in the topic description.
kungfuton 14y ago
It uses Facebook? I don't. Bummer. Good luck on the app though.
lumberjack 14y ago
Your product isn't clearly defined and the very last two sentences have a hint at what the product might be. What are you actually offering? Also, a lot of people are fed up with this end-of-the-world thing and might be somewhat turned off that you are using it as a theme for your product description.
bbissoon 14y ago
17 days is a bit shortlived lol. But, I feel it can be expanded to encompass anything you wish to do with friends where you can publicly list goals, add photos from each accomplishment etc etc with friends and family. I don't like when apps use Facebook as a prerequisite, but I would find a way to utilize Facebook's reach without requiring it to participate. Use it as a tool - not as the foundation. It's a concept, needs some refining - but there's promise.
- JanKoenig 14y ago
  thank you for your feedback! "Use it as a tool - not as the foundation" is something we will strongly think about when building our next app.
joshmangel 14y ago
I don't really see the value in your site - personally wouldn't use it. But if you guys are stuck on the idea, I'd take out the big block of text that reads: "What if on December 21st 2012 the world really came to an end?" and replace it with something a bit more to the point about what you guys are doing.
ankk 14y ago
change the Font Style... :/
xauronx 14y ago
Wow, really unnecessarily harsh people in here. Maybe someone should start a community for people who are interested in start-ups and tech projects so these people aren't burdened by posts like this.. oh wait.

13 points by JanKoenig 14y ago

masnick 14y ago

Clickable: http://www.doitbefore.com http://www.doitbefore.com I don't do Facebook logins on 3rd party sites, but the landing page looks nice.

hieronymusN 14y ago

"make piece with someone"

padseeker 14y ago

"Are we providing enough value for the users?" Enough value for what?

GFischer 14y ago

First of all, congratulations for shipping, that's half the battle :) . I like the logo, background very much. Like masnick, I don't really use Facebook logins unless I absolutely must (AND it's blocked at work). I'd remove the "test test test" goal :) . Maybe you can pre-populate from the best-known bucket lists?

vacipr 14y ago

So you built an app that's only viable 17 days ?

slajax 14y ago
no they built a "startup" that is only viable for 17 days.
- Goranek 14y ago
  is it really import if it's "startup" or just a website? ...
JanKoenig 14y ago
hey. for us it's just an experiment: are people willing to submit a single goal and show it to others? of course after 21st there are other possibilities to catch people's attention (think about New Year's resolutions).
- vacipr 14y ago
  The problem is the world will most likely not end and you will be forced to change the approach. The other thing is discoverability If people really want something they'll do it eventually especially if they believe the world ends,with or without an app such as yours. As with all opinions mine may be biased especially since I'm not a big social networking enthusiast. I hope you guys get the best out of this experiment.

mansigandhi 14y ago

Congratulations on going live! I think maybe a short explanation on how you add value/your USP might help. There are several goal achievement related websites out there. Also, you probably want to think about how you are going to change the punch line post Dec 2012 :)

ChrisBland 14y ago

Nice looking landing page but I don't have facebook so the site is completely useless to me.

roasbeef 14y ago

Just because you created a web app, doesn't mean you have a startup.

bbissoon 14y ago
... Straight mean bro.
JanKoenig 14y ago
hey. I just wanted to follow format conventions. "Ask HN: Review my Startup" is a thread I often see here, so I tried it out. Of course I know that a simple web app is no startup at all, that's the reason why I called it "web app" and not "startup" in the topic description.

kungfuton 14y ago

It uses Facebook? I don't. Bummer. Good luck on the app though.

lumberjack 14y ago

Your product isn't clearly defined and the very last two sentences have a hint at what the product might be. What are you actually offering? Also, a lot of people are fed up with this end-of-the-world thing and might be somewhat turned off that you are using it as a theme for your product description.

bbissoon 14y ago

17 days is a bit shortlived lol. But, I feel it can be expanded to encompass anything you wish to do with friends where you can publicly list goals, add photos from each accomplishment etc etc with friends and family. I don't like when apps use Facebook as a prerequisite, but I would find a way to utilize Facebook's reach without requiring it to participate. Use it as a tool - not as the foundation. It's a concept, needs some refining - but there's promise.

JanKoenig 14y ago
thank you for your feedback! "Use it as a tool - not as the foundation" is something we will strongly think about when building our next app.

joshmangel 14y ago

I don't really see the value in your site - personally wouldn't use it. But if you guys are stuck on the idea, I'd take out the big block of text that reads: "What if on December 21st 2012 the world really came to an end?" and replace it with something a bit more to the point about what you guys are doing.

ankk 14y ago

change the Font Style... :/

xauronx 14y ago

Wow, really unnecessarily harsh people in here. Maybe someone should start a community for people who are interested in start-ups and tech projects so these people aren't burdened by posts like this.. oh wait.