It would be nice if you eliminated a few lines - "You suddenly realise that you need to find a web hosting service to host your super cool site..." "Obviously

It would be nice if you eliminated a few lines - "You suddenly realise that you need to find a web hosting service to host your super cool site..." "Obviously you need a pro plan.. not just an amateur(<-sp check!) free one..." "You start Googling for some services..." Perhaps you could cut some out like so: "You realise that you need a pro web hosting service to host your super cool site..." Also, consider spacing the lines out more. Compare the screen that starts "You are really in a hurry to choose one..." vs the screen that starts "But then..."