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Do you think this video is clear (message wise)? Is it too long? Boring? Does the background sound add to the video or is it a distraction?
by melvinram 18y ago
Do you think this video is clear (message wise)? Is it too long? Boring? Does the background sound add to the video or is it a distraction?
- snprbob86 18y agoThe background sound is very distracting.
- melvinram 18y agoyea, most people seem to agree with you. It's going to get chopped out in the next version.
- sobriquet 18y agoFeels too long. After about a minute I got the point and skipped to the end. The site seems easy to use, so I don't think you need such detail. If users are having trouble learning how to use the product, consider splitting up the demos into multiple videos so I can watch short segments. The script felt very wordy. The words and screencast should compliment each other, but they felt very duplicitous here. I'd cut out 30% of the voice over, allowing the video to get the point across. My favorite resource for learning how to be concise is "On Writing Well" by William Zinsser. Check it out.
- melvinram 18y agoI'll check it out. Thanks!