This was a sort of naive grant proposal I put together last year for a local grant program. I'd like to take what I've learned since then and rewrite/resubmit

This was a sort of naive grant proposal I put together last year for a local grant program. I'd like to take what I've learned since then and rewrite/resubmit it this Spring, but hey - what do you all think? Love to hear criticism, here or (anonymous) commentform on the site (until the spammers come, it's pretty homebrew). Help me help my home in Michigan!