If the author sees this, I don't mean to be harsh! It's possible I'm mistaken: I'm just going off of a few "smells" Very impressive if I'm wrong (hopefully som

If the author sees this, I don't mean to be harsh! It's possible I'm mistaken: I'm just going off of a few "smells" Very impressive if I'm wrong (hopefully some of the comments help you prune some of these smells, if you wish)