I found his blog to be more entertaining and likely to be read all the way through than what you just wrote. For me, it struck a decent balance between straigh

I found his blog to be more entertaining and likely to be read all the way through than what you just wrote. For me, it struck a decent balance between straight prose and casual, frank humor. If we wanted everyone's blog to read like the owner's manual for an automobile, I guess you'd have a point... but do we really?