The author, Eric Ries, put this draft together quickly based on an email conversation. He bravely embraces the "release early and incorporate feedback mantra."

The author, Eric Ries, put this draft together quickly based on an email conversation. He bravely embraces the "release early and incorporate feedback mantra." I probably would have revised it many more times. Which approach has the highest benefit or the lowest cost, I don't know. This is a long way of saying that we're looking for feedback. What do you think?