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What is this I see? This I don't understand. Near matches, you say? I am at your command. But the matches don't match! The rhymes, they are

What is this I see? This I don't understand. Near matches, you say? I am at your command. But the matches don't match! The rhymes, they are off! What am I to do? My brain is too soft. Yet now I move boldly Into a new verse The fucking matches don't work. Fuck this bullshit. I could try to understand. Study like I'm in school. The numbers on the left. They seem kind of cool. But my attention can't hold. The wide internet looms. If I am your target, your product is doomed.

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demodesigns 14y ago
Let me start of by saying thank you! Your feedback is great at any rate The near matches are there to guide you through Tough words you may face that leave you stuck at the gate But alas near matches help give you a clue To help keep your poem straight This tool is still yet a hack and much too new Have a bit of hope and we will help you create Great poetry for all to view I don't believe we are doomed in fate The poem you created was amazing and true I see it as a victory that you found time to try and operate So please let us try to make your experience less blue By letting us know what we can improve to ease your current state
- JesseAldridge 14y ago
  I do think it's nice I poke and I jest This mu'fuckin thingy It's really the best Despite the bad rhymes Showing up on the right I think this here app Is tighter than tight Do you not see wrong words? Showing up over there? Right now it says "bright" Which we both know ain't right My poem til here Was like ABCB? A failure perhaps To detect that rhyme scheme? I'm not a poet I think you can tell I'm just like a kid Just ringing a bell So what do I know? Maybe it's right. I'll stop here for now And bid you goodnight. Edit: Ooohhhh, I'm supposed to enter the Rhyme Scheme manually. I assumed it was supposed to be automatically inferred from the poem. It wasn't obvious to me that the rhyme scheme is an input field.
  - kybernetikos 14y ago
    I'm not sure you're not a poet. This one and your earlier one have a certain something that is definitely more than what is being added by the tool (compare them with the response by demodesigns, yours are simply better poetry). I particularly like Right now it says "bright" Which we both know ain't right" Because of course as soon as you used it it became right. By the way, the numbers on the left are the syllable count. Pretty useful if you're doing a limerick or haiku.

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demodesigns 14y ago

Let me start of by saying thank you! Your feedback is great at any rate The near matches are there to guide you through Tough words you may face that leave you stuck at the gate But alas near matches help give you a clue To help keep your poem straight This tool is still yet a hack and much too new Have a bit of hope and we will help you create Great poetry for all to view I don't believe we are doomed in fate The poem you created was amazing and true I see it as a victory that you found time to try and operate So please let us try to make your experience less blue By letting us know what we can improve to ease your current state

JesseAldridge 14y ago
I do think it's nice I poke and I jest This mu'fuckin thingy It's really the best Despite the bad rhymes Showing up on the right I think this here app Is tighter than tight Do you not see wrong words? Showing up over there? Right now it says "bright" Which we both know ain't right My poem til here Was like ABCB? A failure perhaps To detect that rhyme scheme? I'm not a poet I think you can tell I'm just like a kid Just ringing a bell So what do I know? Maybe it's right. I'll stop here for now And bid you goodnight. Edit: Ooohhhh, I'm supposed to enter the Rhyme Scheme manually. I assumed it was supposed to be automatically inferred from the poem. It wasn't obvious to me that the rhyme scheme is an input field.
- kybernetikos 14y ago
  I'm not sure you're not a poet. This one and your earlier one have a certain something that is definitely more than what is being added by the tool (compare them with the response by demodesigns, yours are simply better poetry). I particularly like Right now it says "bright" Which we both know ain't right" Because of course as soon as you used it it became right. By the way, the numbers on the left are the syllable count. Pretty useful if you're doing a limerick or haiku.