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fresh spring grass erupting fast the distant engine purr comes ouch goes the lawnmower

• 0______0 7mo ago
  Beautiful. How did you come up with that? It's strangely captivating.
  • ZeWaka 7mo ago
    Just a normal haiku pattern and waiting for tests to finish, 5-7-5. Could be 'wrong' since erupting is "technically" 3 syllables - but I think it sounds better said fast. Becomes a 7-7-5 that way. Same issue with 'lawnmower.'