The original article suggests ways of writing that will aid reading, and they give reasons why the texts they quote are poorly expressed. The article is useful

The original article suggests ways of writing that will aid reading, and they give reasons why the texts they quote are poorly expressed. The article is useful because of that. Observation: In the child comments in the post you link to is a comment from xanmas. This user points out the space constraints on much academic publishing. I remember papers in experimental physics where the list of authors took up more space than the text of the paper - however some re-writing always helps.