Honestly, the one thing that irked me the most was the fact he says he emailed 70 partners, on one replied and then the next paragraph, he quotes a reply. So...

Honestly, the one thing that irked me the most was the fact he says he emailed 70 partners, on one replied and then the next paragraph, he quotes a reply. So... some replied? Of those I emailed, 70 didn't reply? What is it? It feels inconsistent logically.