This is actually quite good and you ought to be proud of it! You have an almost trigger attention grab - from a marketing/advertising pov, I'll repeat, this is

This is actually quite good and you ought to be proud of it! You have an almost trigger attention grab - from a marketing/advertising pov, I'll repeat, this is quite good. I wish the content was different but only bc I think it will really strongly resonate with some people - which of course is itself a metric of success. I really like the experience and the incredible potential for artistic expression with this framework. I think you might be onto something significant - it could almost be like its own form. (I'm not on much of the internet - so just ignore me if this a style I ought to exactly know) Regardless, well done!