My comments: - The presentation gets too text heavy later on. Cut out some of the text and get more straight to the point. It also might be a good idea to make

My comments: - The presentation gets too text heavy later on. Cut out some of the text and get more straight to the point. It also might be a good idea to make the text stand out more. - I did enjoy the pictures, but on my 1024x768 resolution (laptop screen) I had to scroll down a bit to see it all. Maybe make them a bit smaller or minimize the header. - On the last slide, it goes back to the first. I know this isn't done, but make sure you lead into a "GET IT NOW" page or something similar after I've gone through the slides. I understood what the product is offering. Seems to be software that uses a webcam to create a simple security/monitoring system? Sounds neat, although when you near the completion of your software it might be a good idea to also show some examples of how easy it is to use (screenshots), instead of spending 4-6 slides describing the problem you are solving. Hope that helps :)