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> https://tritium.legal/blog/redline https://tritium.legal/blog/redline Halfway through this blogpost, I realized it's written for idiots used to the Buzzfeed/

• piker 8mo ago
  Not at all! That is my drafting method creeping through. I try to write each sentence as a separate paragraph first to make sure I don’t get too wed to a paragraph and can delete/move liberally. Then I try to go and merge the paragraphs that have cohesion. Seems like I didn’t do a great job here. Sorry it distracted you, but honestly thanks for giving it a chance and the feedback. Will do a better job on the next one.
  • latexr 8mo ago
    Instead of one paragraph per sentence, try one sentence per line. https://sive.rs/1s https://sive.rs/1s
  • vr46 8mo ago
    I liked it, one idea to a sentence is one of the best pieces of writing advice one can follow. The article reads like a script, it's not bad at all.
    • netsharc 8mo ago
      Today in how to write like a YouTuber...