I can verify it looks fine. Not absolutely rigorous, e.g. > "You have far more knowledge of the stars and the planets than any other living man" Why "far mor

I can verify it looks fine. Not absolutely rigorous, e.g. > "You have far more knowledge of the stars and the planets than any other living man" Why "far more knowledge"? I don't see any emphasis like that in the original. I'd have a few nits but they're of similarly small magnitude.