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Moar links. Seriously, you've got some awesome click targets and no links. Logo / title -> Link to app store Titles for copy -> Link to app store Big awe
by fleitz 14y ago
Moar links. Seriously, you've got some awesome click targets and no links.
Logo / title -> Link to app store
Titles for copy -> Link to app store
Big awesome image of app on phone -> link to app store.
While you're at it sign up for the affliate program and get an extra 5% from Apple. Your copy highlights features not benefits.
Pick the best benefit of the app and highlight that.
For me I'd go with something like.
Impress them with a hidden gem.
Wanderous helps you find great places, right next door.
(I actually have no idea what kinds of places wanderous will help me find, etc, I'm assuming it finds great restaurants or something)
Then go buy a hires stock photo of a great example of a place someone might discover on Wanderous along with two smiling people enjoying themselves, multiply the image by 20% black and put your text on top in white along with the image of the app.
The sign up should state that due to demand everyone will have to wait for an account and to reserve their spot they should put in their email, else they'll have to wait even longer to find great places.
- awolf 14y agoThanks Fleitz. I missed links on the Logo+title+screenshot. I'll definitely get them in there for when the app because available on the store. The spots are not necessarily restaurant specific. The points of interest are closer to encompassing whole neighborhoods rather than a single restaurant. It's really just about where the hotspots are in a given location. Some are chosen due to a cluster or restaurants, but others may be chosen simply because its a scenic are where lots of photos are taken and shared. Your comment definitely shows me that I need to convey this somehow. Thanks again!
- fleitz 14y agoAwesome, scenic shots can convert like crazy too so you may want to find a professional photo of a great art installation, or fantastic shot that captures a neighbourhood.