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The Keep: http://raganwald.posterous.com/the-keep http://raganwald.posterous.com/the-keep
by raganwald 14y ago
The Keep:
http://raganwald.posterous.com/the-keep http://raganwald.posterous.com/the-keep
- graue 14y agoYour original, short comment seems much clearer about the point you're trying to get across: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=4597584 https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=4597584
- raganwald 14y agoI agree! The trouble is, once i started telling the story as a parable, I got emotionally involved in telling the town's story instead of using it as a secondary device for making a primary point. Thanks for the excellent feedback.