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The thing you're describing that's missing is context, not information. At that point in the plot, the reasons why they couldn't simply take a break wherever th
by fluoridation 10mo ago
The thing you're describing that's missing is context, not information. At that point in the plot, the reasons why they couldn't simply take a break wherever they wanted had already been explained, so it didn't need restating. As for mood-setting, I've already addressed that in other replies.