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I'd start by deleting all the numbered section headings, and add either a transition word (then, so) or a transition sentence (why you went from step n to step
by furyofantares 11mo ago
I'd start by deleting all the numbered section headings, and add either a transition word (then, so) or a transition sentence (why you went from step n to step n+1 or after how much time or whatnot).
- EmilStenstrom 11mo agoNew iteration up. I kept the headings because they make the text easier to scan, but made them more descriptive. Added some transition words. Slight improvement I think.