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First - UI and UX are great, well done. perhaps you just need time, and move out of the .au domain and do it globally? to the other things: I guess just that
by eranation 14y ago
First - UI and UX are great, well done. perhaps you just need time, and move out of the .au domain and do it globally?
to the other things:
I guess just that the title "TRACK YOUR PROPERTY PORTFOLIO ONLINE." is a bit lackluster
try something like
"Handling your leased property is a headache? Not anymore!"
"Try now for free and in 5 minutes you'll get started"
See how we helped X property owners stop worrying and start saving money.
something like this...
oh, and get rid of the long domain, and get a .io or .ly short URL, and make it global, not just for Australia
AND, add a video
Explain to people how they save money and time
Use analytics to see how your product is being used (mixpanel)
Another point is, are you really solving a problem? perhaps people with lot's of properties just pay someone to take care of it, and people with just one don't have enough headache?
sometimes it is what it is...
p.s. if you add ability for people to pay rent directly via you using their credit card, you'll make millions (send me a check when it happens)
update:
a few more
- try our features, we think you'll love them? show some confidence, of course you'll love them!
- font's too small, too much information, contrast is bad (dark text on dark background)
- all in all a bit "gray" I miss to understand what exactly are you saving me
- laurencei 14y agothanks erantion - I'll work on all of that. I appreciate the detailed reply