It's "might set off" not "might have". I don't mind the addition of complements between subject and verb. I view it as a stylistic choice especially when senten

It's "might set off" not "might have". I don't mind the addition of complements between subject and verb. I view it as a stylistic choice especially when sentences remain that short. I know English reader hates it when the verb is too far from subject however. Clearly, this one could be improved but I think calling it a failure of editorial standard is over harsh.