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IMO the em-dash version is way easier to read in this example, FWIW.
by jph00 10mo ago
IMO the em-dash version is way easier to read in this example, FWIW.
- Cogito 10mo agoI think I took out an extra comma too, which hurts readability. Personally I write with too many asides, normally done with commas and parentheses. It's a comforting habit to fall into, and makes getting your thoughts out so much easier, at the expense of interrupting the reader's train of thought. I don't normally notice when I'm writing with asides so the jarring em-dashes were a good reminder to try and edit them out where I can.