This comment needs some editing by a less haughty writer it it's to be widely read. Error-wise I didn't notice a ton of things, but: > This [could use] some e

This comment needs some editing by a less haughty writer it it's to be widely read. Error-wise I didn't notice a ton of things, but: > This [could use] some editing by a more experience English speaker if it's to be widely read [without grammar pedants coming out of the woodwork].