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Bad writing examples here in separate comment, lots of recency bias with them, they’re almost all litrpgs, but they’re cheap! And bad is a strong word. It’s pro
by Lord-Jobo 11mo ago
Bad writing examples here in separate comment, lots of recency bias with them, they’re almost all litrpgs, but they’re cheap! And bad is a strong word. It’s probably more fair to say they have notable faults to me.
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Bad prose with good ideas and flow:
-defiance of the fall 1
-the primal hunter 1
Bad structural flow and immersion breaking:
-bibliomancer 1
Polarizing characterization with strong Voice:
-he who fights with monsters 1
Most improved book to book:
-The cradle series. First book is intentionally stilted, but just difficult to read. Author quickly adjusts away from this.