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It's not a run-on, it's a normal sentence with a moderately complex dependent clause. The only problem with this sentence I can see is that we serve people's i
by getnormality 11mo ago
It's not a run-on, it's a normal sentence with a moderately complex dependent clause.
The only problem with this sentence I can see is that we serve people's interests, not their interest. That might be considered a grammar error - we expect plural objects (interests) for plural subjects (youths). It doesn't seem like a catastrophic one, the sentence can still be easily understood.
By the way, I'm aware I'm a comma splicer. I casually break grammatical rules when I feel like making things read more like how I talk.