It would be clearer with a comma after "increases". Without that it's a garden-path sentence: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garden-path_sentence https://en.wik

It would be clearer with a comma after "increases". Without that it's a garden-path sentence: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garden-path_sentence https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garden-path_sentence You read "increases" as a transitive verb, and then reach the "collapses" at the end of the sentence and have to re-parse the whole thing when you realize it was really intransitive.