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The abstract is some of the worst writing I've read in a while. Trying to sound so very smart while being incapable of getting your point across. This whole art
by 65 11mo ago
The abstract is some of the worst writing I've read in a while. Trying to sound so very smart while being incapable of getting your point across. This whole article reeks of pretentiousness.
- codelikeawolf 11mo agoYeah, it came off as complete nonsense. If someone were talking to me like this in person, I'd probably start suspecting they were doing it to distract me while their friend was outside stealing my hubcaps.
- stavros 11mo agoYeah, to date I think the smartest writing/speaking I've seen was Feynman. The way he could explain complicated physics concepts in simple words is just unmatched.
- optymizer 11mo agoFeynman's Physics lectures are proof of that: https://www.feynmanlectures.caltech.edu/ https://www.feynmanlectures.caltech.edu/ 10/10 should be required reading for all humans
- mrob 11mo agoIt would be clearer with a comma after "increases". Without that it's a garden-path sentence: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garden-path_sentence https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garden-path_sentence You read "increases" as a transitive verb, and then reach the "collapses" at the end of the sentence and have to re-parse the whole thing when you realize it was really intransitive.