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You would just say "improving efficiency". Whereas theirs is like: "Improving the efficiency [... of what?]"
by bre1010 1y ago
You would just say "improving efficiency". Whereas theirs is like: "Improving the efficiency [... of what?]"
- codazoda 1y agoYou left out words at the front that are important. “deliver better quality while also improving the efficiency.” Reads fine to me. An editor would likely drop “the”.