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"Improving the efficiency" sounds fine to me (a native English speaker), what's wrong with it in your opinion?
by gpm 1y ago
"Improving the efficiency" sounds fine to me (a native English speaker), what's wrong with it in your opinion?
- bre1010 1y agoYou would just say "improving efficiency". Whereas theirs is like: "Improving the efficiency [... of what?]"
- codazoda 1y agoYou left out words at the front that are important. “deliver better quality while also improving the efficiency.” Reads fine to me. An editor would likely drop “the”.
- latentnumber 1y ago"the" is redundant is probably what GP means.
- burkaman 1y agoUsually you would say "improving the efficiency of x and y". In this case at the end of the sentence it should be "improving the models' efficiency" or just "improving efficiency". I don't think it's "wrong" and it's obviously clear what they mean, but I agree that the phrasing is a little awkward.