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"While 1.3B€ is not pocket change, it is also an amount that ASML can not afford to lose." - The sentence is framed like a contrast but then instead it says the
by bondarchuk 1y ago
"While 1.3B€ is not pocket change, it is also an amount that ASML can not afford to lose." - The sentence is framed like a contrast but then instead it says the same thing twice.
- realty_geek 1y ago@bondarchuk you are right. Something wrong with that sentence.
- 0x457 1y agoIt reads like the second part counters the first, but it’s actually the same point repeated. It's not that hard to understand.
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- kaechle 1y agoI’ll see your pedantry and raise you ... more pedantry. The sentence may be a bit clunky, but there’s nothing grammatically wrong with it. And you’re leaving out the first sentence, which frames the comparison: > ASML gross revenue was 28B€ in 2024, and their net income was 7.5B€. While 1.3B€ (the amount ASML invested in this 1.7B€ fund raise) is not pocket change, it is also an amount that ASML can not afford to lose. Worded another way: > ASML had a healthy margin of 7.5B€ on 28B€ in gross revenue in 2024. 1.3B€ isn’t a huge chunk of this, relatively speaking, but *it’s also an amount that ASML can’t afford to lose.* Still clunky. Still not wrong.
- kgwgk 1y ago> there’s nothing grammatically wrong with it. There was nothing in the comment that you reply to suggesting that it was grammatically wrong: "The sentence is framed like a contrast but then instead it says the same thing twice." If anything it suggests it's semantically wrong.
- paulddraper 1y agoEither incorrectly worded, or very poorly worded. It's a open question as to which one.
- yieldcrv 1y agolanguage exists to convey a shared concept, you don’t think the sentence means “it’s a lot of money for ASML to risk losing?” and wouldn’t have been mentioned if it meant inconsequential or small?
- paulddraper 1y agoBased on context + structure, I believe the sentence has a stray "not" -- the amount is not small but it is an affordable loss for ASML.
- ath92 1y agoYou replaced “1.3B is not pocket change” with “1.3B€ isn’t a huge chunk of this”. Those have opposite meanings.