I'm a graphic artist and art director, and probably not your target market. But having said that, I think you've got a good idea. However... - I would have li

I'm a graphic artist and art director, and probably not your target market. But having said that, I think you've got a good idea. However... - I would have like to see a very quick visual narrative other than the video that efficiently explained what Moshbag is. - The site has poor UI and UX. - Visually the site is dull. I don't know what resources you have available, but here are some nice examples of simple visual summaries/narratives: https://developer.apple.com/programs/ios/ https://developer.apple.com/programs/ios/ https://build.phonegap.com/ https://build.phonegap.com/ http://www.getballpark.com/ http://www.getballpark.com/ Keep going though. You want to be able to say you gave it your best.