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Good read but kind of went off the rails a bit at the end there.
by N_Lens 1y ago
Good read but kind of went off the rails a bit at the end there.
- profsummergig 1y agoFor me it went off the rails in the middle, and I couldn't follow what was going on any more. Lesson in there (for me). Stories need to have a tight plot.