I'm thrilled that someone is actually thinking about how to make the presentation of arguments better. Even though the example is a little buggy and hard to re

I'm thrilled that someone is actually thinking about how to make the presentation of arguments better. Even though the example is a little buggy and hard to read, I think its a great first step. The visual presentation of ideas in a clear format is such a necessary skill. I'm sick of going to presentations (e.g Powerpoint lectures) where people throw up a ton of stuff on to their slides without a proper gauge of audience understanding. Do presenters honestly think they can put up a paragraph of information and expect the audience to analyze appropriately while they blab on and on? If presenters were more clear about their arguments, and conveyed those points in a visually appealing way, I guarantee companies would be far more productive, accidents would happen far less often (Edward Tufte NASA reference), and research would be far more innovative. Just my two cents.