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Look, this is an art piece, not an article about productivity. Frankly, the LLM here is but a plot device; the point is temptation, weakness, delusion, sin. It'
by nine_k 1y ago
Look, this is an art piece, not an article about productivity. Frankly, the LLM here is but a plot device; the point is temptation, weakness, delusion, sin. It's the flourishes of the prose what I enjoyed most here, frankly.
- mpalmer 1y agoEvery part of my critique applies regardless; I'm not sure what you think you're contradicting here. At any rate, the writer is struggling with temptations and weaknesses, of the sort better handled by an editor than a priest.
- nine_k 1y agoFor a therapeutic experience, I recommended you Baudolino by Umberto Eco, a book of hilarious historical fiction. The first couple of chapters use the device of imperfections of the narrator's language in an even more in-your-face manner.