It's really not a problem. I almost can't imagine a problem any less significant, lol. I think what you updated it to is best of both worlds though. Cool Title

It's really not a problem. I almost can't imagine a problem any less significant, lol. I think what you updated it to is best of both worlds though. Cool Title (bonus if it's metaphorical or has Greek mythology references) + Descriptor. I sometimes read papers with titles like that I've always liked that style, honestly.