> This is really hard to read. I am old and I agree. It is full of things that break the flow of reading like asking a hypothetical question to the reader and

> This is really hard to read. I am old and I agree. It is full of things that break the flow of reading like asking a hypothetical question to the reader and following it up with a plosive like 'BOOM!', or inserting useless conversational stops like like 'sure,' 'But...', and '...Nope!'. Makes it sound/feel like an excited toddler is desperate to tell you something, but cant really get to the point.