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It's not immediately apparent what your site does. Instead of the cryptic "unlike other websites, wysp is not about showcase etc" , can you just write something
by nanijoe 14y ago
It's not immediately apparent what your site does. Instead of the cryptic "unlike other websites, wysp is not about showcase etc" , can you just write something as straight forward as "Learn how to draw" or " Let us help you improve your pencil skills" or whatever message directly tells your target audience what it is exactly you do
- hippo33 14y agoI completely agree with this. I think using plain English and a couple of concrete examples at the top of the page would help immensely. I didn't know what this meant, for example: "Wysp is a journey to realize your full creative potential."