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oh!, now I got it =) will increase "Shy" parameter and decrease "Braggart" parameters in my "Normal speech" to "LinkedInese" translator +) Thank you for feedba

by ooisee 1y ago

oh!, now I got it =) will increase "Shy" parameter and decrease "Braggart" parameters in my "Normal speech" to "LinkedInese" translator +) Thank you for feedback =) (I was thinking that it is not MY wisdom i am talking, but about "Z80" wisdom - all the code I have seen on demoscene and e-zines.)

peteforde 1y ago
I am (definitely) not telling you to act shy or not be proud of your accomplishments. Ultimately, it's up to you if you want to redeclare your bona fides in almost every paragraph. It doesn't make for great reading, but it's your call either way. If anything, I'm encouraging you to let your narrative and actions speak for your skills.
hughw 1y ago
Yes, this reinforces that the article suffered from the LLM rewrite. Your comments here prove your natural voice is more compelling for this audience than the LLM "cat post" style.
- peteforde 1y ago
  That's a new one for me! What is a cat post?
  - hughw 1y ago
    Earlier, @oisee said 'I hate LinkedIn article style -> let LLM convert my hadrcore-oldschool style into something like "You won't believe what my grandmother's cat taught me about ..."'