The app sounded only goofy on a first read-through, but I think if your copy describes more benefits of the application for users, it would come off as more use

The app sounded only goofy on a first read-through, but I think if your copy describes more benefits of the application for users, it would come off as more useful! Have you heard of Jerry Seinfeld's "Red X" productivity trick[1]? This application can be used for exactly that. If the description discussed that first, instead of the relation to childhood "star charts," then it would read to be more useful more quickly. Congrats on shipping code! [1] http://lifehacker.com/281626/jerry-seinfelds-productivity-secret http://lifehacker.com/281626/jerry-seinfelds-productivity-se...