The title of this post... > Acetylated cellulose suppresses mass through commensals consuming carbohydrates ... is far less intelligible than the original...

The title of this post... > Acetylated cellulose suppresses mass through commensals consuming carbohydrates ... is far less intelligible than the original... > Acetylated cellulose suppresses body mass gain through gut commensals consuming host-accessible carbohydrates ... which itself isn't a prize. At least the original title makes it (mostly) clear that we're talking about biology; the edited one starts with plant material and then veers into violating conservation of mass by communes. And why do both titles use the word "commensals" when "bacteria" would be accurate and much clearer? Editors... we need editors...