It's not that my wording is better- I don't mean to be changing yours, just adding. The thought pattern is to tell the user why each feature is important to th

It's not that my wording is better- I don't mean to be changing yours, just adding. The thought pattern is to tell the user why each feature is important to them. Don't make them guess. Don't allow them to guess. Manage, as much as you can, their mental state while on your page.