I've subscribed to the feed, curious how it will develop. I believe there are two things that could be improved. First, spelling and grammar. I know it's super

I've subscribed to the feed, curious how it will develop. I believe there are two things that could be improved. First, spelling and grammar. I know it's superficial, but as a reader I always get the feeling an author doesn't value my time when they don't proof read their stuff. The other thing that bothered me is the usage of cultural references, in this case Star Trek. It's a little patronizing to the reader and it's also superfluous to describe the renderer in this way. Just tell us what it does. You might even be better off leaving out certain specifics in science fiction, your stories will have a much longer shelf life that way. That being said: keep on writing!