Thanks a lot for the honest feedback, I wrote this piece few months ago, and didn't get the time to build links and setup a framework for the website. Feedbac

Thanks a lot for the honest feedback, I wrote this piece few months ago, and didn't get the time to build links and setup a framework for the website. Feedback on the copy, and your inputs are greatly appreciated, I'll try to make the piece more gentle and human as possible, first.