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The goal of truncating the sentences in that way was precisely to increase the suspense a bit, but I believe I miserably failed, making it just less readable.
by draga79 1y ago
The goal of truncating the sentences in that way was precisely to increase the suspense a bit, but I believe I miserably failed, making it just less readable.
- eks391 1y agoJust because they didn't see your vision doesn't mean it wasn't good. You clearly had an intent with it. For my anecdote, it worked for me and I didn't even notice the spacing until they pointed it out.
- Moru 1y agoIf you have a wide screen, you won't notice it so much. Try reading on a narrow screen in just about the wrong resolution and it will look like the author used notepad and hit enter every time they were too close to the edge instead of letting the program do the wrapping.
- dgan 1y agoNot OP: for what it's worth I understood your intent, and it didn't bother me
- Trixter 1y agoWorse, the formatting failed. Lines are breaking before the sentence is over, leading to two words in the next line, then a new line. (Linux, Chrome)
- amatecha 1y agoDefinitely not the end of the world - no worries! It just feels a bit uh, haphazard in a way. My eye is leading forward for the next words only to find I need to skip to the next line. I usually read very fast so I'll be a bit more sensitive to variations in formatting like that, I guess? All good though, like I said a great read anyway!