I'm torn by the screenshot; do the buzzwords in the sample make this more or less appealing to your customers? If there is no measurable difference, can you do

I'm torn by the screenshot; do the buzzwords in the sample make this more or less appealing to your customers? If there is no measurable difference, can you do the world a service and reduce the buzzword usage? When I'm faced with a question like "Did this individual contribute to collaborative innovation and excellence in a dynamic group setting?" I tend to throw-up in my mouth a little and stop giving honest answers and start thinking about which answer will most benefit me...