Looks coherent and well considered to me. Oxide can't really get away with hiring friendly-but-incompetent. I liked this section from the written part, that loo

Looks coherent and well considered to me. Oxide can't really get away with hiring friendly-but-incompetent. I liked this section from the written part, that looks worth doing as a self reflection exercise. > What work have you found most challenging in your career and why? > What work have you done that you are particularly proud of and why? > When have you been happiest in your professional career and why? > When have you been unhappiest in your professional career and why?