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He had me until the second point's header. Overall it was a fantastic read if just for the moment of realization. Still it would have benefited with more subtly
by Danieru 14y ago
He had me until the second point's header. Overall it was a fantastic read if just for the moment of realization. Still it would have benefited with more subtly or fewer items. Some point's like #4 had great potential but needed less sarcasm.
- akiselev 14y agoMore subtlety would definitely have done this article well. As it stands, the satire is both obvious and contrived.