If you leave out every adjective they read better. "The walls of Earth’s Spaceport Alpha hummed with a low thrum – the sound of power, of humanity’s ambition m

If you leave out every adjective they read better. "The walls of Earth’s Spaceport Alpha hummed with a low thrum – the sound of power, of humanity’s ambition made tangible. Rain lashed against the windows, blurring the cityscape into a wash of grey and amber. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of disinfectant."